Persuasive Paragraph

MS's assignment in his Grammar Ace workbook today was to write a persuasive paragraph about one of his parents. In spite of much campaigning and flashing of dazzling smiles by his maternal unit, he chose to write about his father.

My dad is the greatest dad in the whole world, for a lot of reasons. For example, he’s always there to help me. And we’ve gone on lots of fun trips, like to Wadi Dana, or to the Dead Sea Spa with the huge waterslide. He’s always willing to play Wii with me, and, as a matter of fact, he would rather play games with me than go to work.